The feedback that I seek is from the Ladie's because they're the ones who view it !!

but the feedback you'll get is from both because this is a co-ed forum

EDIT: but your profile looks fine

I like your gun.

welcome and good luck!!!

Welcome and good luck

Hi!

I would add something about the type of lady you wish to attract; qualities you are looking for in a potential partner.

Also, add something kooky and fun, or a few goals to inspire conversation to your profile introduction: travel or educational plans, etc.

Your pix are great!

Have a blast!

Even though I want to like you the text doesn't engage me. The journey concept kind of starts off on an out of date jargon and repeats itself with several other remarks that sound a little too PC and unnatural for a straight guy. Sounds like you had a lady co-worker coach you and comes off a little phoney.

While you might have dumped the drama queen out of your life that you had one and reference it kind of sends up a red flag.

Wearing a cap inside looks kind of lame. Your actually a cute guy; balding or not so embrace it.

The close is important in selling a profile but telling a woman to write you a couple of lines kind of sounds like you are passing the buck to them to do your chore work.

Being a healthcare worker might have it's perks but working holidays, weekends, and nights would make dateing difficult so you don't want to play that card so solidly unless you balence it out with an outside of work life with pictures and text.

Or that you have good health unless you didn't at one time.

Sometimes it is the stuff people read between the lines that hurts you more. Seems unfair when you don't say anything revolting or stupid and probably work your tush off helping others. Good luck.