Topic: for ever more
nice_guy1952's photo
Wed 03/11/09 05:44 AM
what are my chances,what do you think.

lilith401's photo
Wed 03/11/09 05:45 AM
Looks good, try running it through spell check. Women are definitely more spelling and grammar oriented than men.

Best of luck to you!

Urg04es's photo
Wed 03/11/09 06:01 AM
I agree....looks good but check your spelling. Also, my condolences on your recent loss. Good luck to you. flowerforyou

DragonFlyTat's photo
Wed 03/11/09 06:04 AM
Sorry about your loss. Best of luck to you. Get into the forums and you will get to know great and awesome friends.

no photo
Wed 03/11/09 06:16 AM
drool Wow! drool

nice_guy1952's photo
Thu 03/12/09 04:18 PM
how hard is it to start over again,

laughsandgiggles's photo
Thu 03/12/09 04:50 PM
its good- right to the point- other than the spelling errors- its a nice profile- good pictures

Im so sorry for your loss- just be patient- relax and let everyone get to know you. Just have fun and see what happens

Welcome and good luck to youflowerforyou

nice_guy1952's photo
Thu 03/12/09 04:51 PM
What do I need to run through spell check?

no photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:02 PM

What do I need to run through spell check?


Your entire essay needs to be spell checked and proof read for grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors.


nice_guy1952's photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:06 PM
Spell check said it was correct.

no photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:32 PM
The spelling is now corrected but you still have a few grammatical issues, comma splices, and inappropriate capitalizations.

I've seen much worse. However, there is still work to be done if you care.

nice_guy1952's photo
Fri 03/13/09 11:51 AM
Edited by nice_guy1952 on Fri 03/13/09 12:09 PM
so many people are getting a Divorce,What ever happen to for ever after.

PATSFAN's photo
Fri 03/13/09 11:53 AM
Best of luck & always be yourself!!drinker