Topic: wanted to share this with you
masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 08:46 PM
its one of the poems i wrote ,

cought in a storm
__________________________

The wind blows , I hear someone calling my name, or is it just the
wind?
Sunshine once brighted my day , now a shadow falls over me.

A feeling I have yet to feel wiped away,
Rain falls , thunder strikes, lights go out , in an instant all is
changed.
I hear my own heart beating, I feel I have lost my way.
when I look in the looking glass I see who i dont want to be.

I am sinking like in quicksand, I cant pull out, I reach for the
hand I once held it is not there,
raindrops slowly fall down my face, I grab hold of the sand around
me, close my eyes and wish Iam in a dream,
I remember him and always will, I take out my umbrella and walk
towards home lost and afraid. with the little strenth i have left I open
the door,hug my children then tuck my self in bed.

written by masterpiece2

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:04 PM
:smile: flowerforyou

masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:04 PM
thanks ms teddy

twosteper's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:07 PM
very beautifdul sug

heart felt

keep writein sug


party on...drinker drinker drinker drinker

masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:09 PM
thank you twosteper,smooched

songbirrd's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:10 PM
flowerforyou I love it.

sweetkyman's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:12 PM
EXCELLENT!

Ralph

Styx's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:12 PM
me too flowerforyou

masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:18 PM
thank you songbirrd means alot to me that you like it and ralph thank
you also styx glad you liked it as well,flowerforyou flowerforyou
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lezah's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:41 PM
What a beautiful poem!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 09:57 PM
thank you lezah, it means alot to me to know you all like it here at jsh
thanks for taking the time to read it ,

catchme_ifucan's photo
Tue 05/01/07 10:00 PM
flowerforyou You Rawk Gurlie!!!! :wink: :heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/01/07 10:02 PM
flowerforyou Beautiful flowerforyou

masterpiece2's photo
Tue 05/01/07 10:09 PM
thank you lamom ,