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Topic: I've got a secret
WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Wed 03/04/09 11:03 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh your sooooooooooooooooo not right had me memorized all along waiting for the big secret then left hanging in the end ya know it is not nice to fool mother nature. Good one brought back the memories of the past. Thanks much for taking the time to read this Txs and for sharing nyour thoughts. One day I might share this little secret but for now I think I'll kep it quiet.

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Wed 03/04/09 11:08 AM
Ok teasey teasier, just please honestly tell me Goliath died of old age........... This was FAN-tab-u-lous! Well worth the time to read! I cringed when y'all ran into Marty's house and then said, Well Damn! You did an excellent job of allowing the reader to join in and be there with ya. good stuff! Honestly I don't know that Goliath was all that mean or if he just simply wanted some attention. All I know is to the many neighborhood kids he was mean. I'm sure he died of old age. And thanks much for the compliments I do appreciate them. I had fun with this one even though I wrote it several months ago. I think we all need to write out our memories before we forget them. I keep personal journals for my sons. I want them to have some idea of my life as a child and young adult as well as these years. They both know these journals are not to be touched till I am gone. Family history is very important to me. Thanks much for stopping by and reading.

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Wed 03/04/09 11:47 AM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :)

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 03/04/09 12:23 PM
Ron, You had me anticipating every movement. Now the ending, we might have to discuss this, you know how curious I am. Now my mind is racing wondering what it might be. I cry, not fair, not fair!!! I'm sure we'll all wait in anticipation if you change your mind about the secret. Great write.

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Wed 03/04/09 03:51 PM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :) Thank you carol. My mind tends to wander back to those days quite often. Enjoy the trip next time you go back. lol

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Wed 03/04/09 03:53 PM
Ron, You had me anticipating every movement. Now the ending, we might have to discuss this, you know how curious I am. Now my mind is racing wondering what it might be. I cry, not fair, not fair!!! I'm sure we'll all wait in anticipation if you change your mind about the secret. Great write. Pam I have been thinking I might do another story about the secret and see if anyone picks it out. Think? Thanks much for stopping and sharing your thoughts.

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Wed 03/04/09 04:42 PM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :) Thank you carol. My mind tends to wander back to those days quite often. Enjoy the trip next time you go back. lol Smiles I will :)

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Wed 03/04/09 06:44 PM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :) Thank you carol. My mind tends to wander back to those days quite often. Enjoy the trip next time you go back. lol Smiles I will :)

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Thu 03/05/09 06:19 AM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :) Thank you carol. My mind tends to wander back to those days quite often. Enjoy the trip next time you go back. lol Smiles I will :) Smiles lots of good memories:) you'll have to write another one soon. Hold on to that secret lol

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Thu 03/05/09 10:09 AM
Nice read :) fill you with good emotions and brings you back to those younger days. Thanks Ron Big Smiles :) Thank you carol. My mind tends to wander back to those days quite often. Enjoy the trip next time you go back. lol Smiles I will :) Smiles lots of good memories:) you'll have to write another one soon. Hold on to that secret lol The secret is safely tucked away till I decide to reveal it.

ivysmom Joined Fri 02/06/09 Posts: 14	Sat 03/07/09 10:32 AM
Oh this is so good (wiping the tears off my face from laughing so hard). Was so caught up in the store didn't drink my hot tea and now its cold. These stories are really good. If you ever publish these stories I want one of the first copies signed. I can see a TV comedy out of this and its a hoot.

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Sat 03/07/09 01:00 PM
Ivy Thank you. I did have fun writing this. I even had a laugh myself.

5x10 Joined Fri 01/30/09 Posts: 9017	Sat 03/07/09 06:08 PM
Those were the days my friend, We thought they'd never end.... Great job! Can't wait for: The Secret, Part two

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Sat 03/07/09 06:46 PM
Those were the days my friend, We thought they'd never end.... Great job! Can't wait for: The Secret, Part two Thanks. Those days were filled with innocence. Lots of great memories from those days. Glad you liked it

BettyB Joined Tue 01/29/08 Posts: 31912	Mon 03/09/09 09:10 AM
you sure like keeping us waiting to know that secret!