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DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 10:29 AM
Clearing cobwebs from my space and mind never knowing quite what I will find A small trincket here, a memory there I have so much stuff, I just never knew where. Paring down what I have, to a managable size I can see now, this is so much more wise. Both my mind and my closet have had so much dust things aging and dirty and covered in rust. I'm finding things clearer than ever before, both my mind and my space have opened up doors. As this process moves on I know I will see both new things and old things of which I need to be free. I continue on with single purpose and drive, clearing the way for the right things to arrive. Time alone will tell where all this will end, but for now I thank you my friend.

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DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 11:06 AM
Thank you Jersey, miskim and Tanya. I find it interesting that it seems to have struck some as sad... I'm, actually and finding the process very uplifting.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 03/02/09 12:26 PM
Clearing cobwebs from my space and mind never knowing quite what I will find A small trincket here, a memory there I have so much stuff, I just never knew where. Paring down what I have, to a managable size I can see now, this is so much more wise. Both my mind and my closet have had so much dust things aging and dirty and covered in rust. I'm finding things clearer than ever before, both my mind and my space have opened up doors. As this process moves on I know I will see both new things and old things of which I need to be free. I continue on with single purpose and drive, clearing the way for the right things to arrive. Time alone will tell where all this will end, but for now I thank you my friend. A journey of Re-Birth one in which you will find the strength in you to move forward in peace Thank you for sharing your private moments of your Spirit

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 12:47 PM
A journey of Re-Birth one in which you will find the strength in you to move forward in peace Thank you for sharing your private moments of your Spirit As I think is true for most of us here the sharing makes it just that much easier. I thank you for reading and being a part of the process.

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 12:48 PM
Thank you CyPoet, I take your reading as a great compliment.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 03/02/09 01:35 PM
It is amazing how you feel when you clean and clear out the clutter...May your time alone bring you all your heart and soul desire...Out with the old and in with the new...Namaste..

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 02:27 PM Edited by DaveyB on Mon 03/02/09 02:30 PM
It is amazing how you feel when you clean and clear out the clutter...May your time alone bring you all your heart and soul desire...Out with the old and in with the new...Namaste.. Yes it is ...Alone is so subjective ... I find, I feel, I am not alone, thank you .

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 03/02/09 03:12 PM
It is amazing how you feel when you clean and clear out the clutter...May your time alone bring you all your heart and soul desire...Out with the old and in with the new...Namaste.. Yes it is ...Alone is so subjective ... I find, I feel, I am not alone, thank you . Hmmm....that is a rather profound and lovely statement~

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 03/02/09 03:56 PM
I have been going to write a poem about the very same thing and here you have expressed it so beautifully. What a gem. Thank you for sharing the process.

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Mon 03/02/09 10:39 PM
I have been going to write a poem about the very same thing and here you have expressed it so beautifully. What a gem. Thank you for sharing the process. Thank you, my stuff has been so... dark lately it was nice to write something a little more up. I hope the fact that I have shared my experience won't stop you from writing on it as well. It would be cool to see someone else's take on the subject.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 03/03/09 06:49 AM
Well put and Good fer'chu!

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Tue 03/03/09 08:30 AM
All part of yet another journey forward.

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Tue 03/03/09 08:34 AM
All part of yet another journey forward. Yes, thank you my friend.

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Tue 03/03/09 08:35 AM
Well put and Good fer'chu! Thank you and, Yes it R .

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 03/03/09 08:51 AM
Wonderful to find a peace from within

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Tue 03/03/09 09:05 AM
Wonderful to find a peace from within Hmm, peace... I'm not sure that's what I've found yet. But I have found a place where I am... comfortable for the moment.