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Topic: The Human Condition
MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 02:32 PM
The Human Condition Loneliness The human condition A state of being A walk thru perdition Our own special Damnation Alone amongst many Eyes searching Without finding any To meet Or greet … No laughter to follow Nothing but hollow Voices echoing off Buildings filled with Bodies walking yet Arriving nowhere No stories to tell No memories to share So afraid to reach out And touch It’s just Asking too much and The harsh inflection of A voiced rejection is Just too Heavy… …to bear… Our driving Desires for Connection Unabashed Affection Given up Like a bad habit… We’ve been Beaten down Pushed around Subjected to An emotional Drought Forced to live In this bleak Abyss Gone from Hopeful to Hopeless A harsh Transition now Standardized Realized as The Human Condition … Mar 2009

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Sun 03/01/09 02:33 PM
Wow!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 03/01/09 02:35 PM
The Human Condition Loneliness The human condition A state of being A walk thru perdition Our own special Damnation Alone amongst many Eyes searching Without finding any To meet Or greet … No laughter to follow Nothing but hollow Voices echoing off Buildings filled with Bodies walking yet Arriving nowhere No stories to tell No memories to share So afraid to reach out And touch It’s just Asking too much and The harsh inflection of A voiced rejection is Just too Heavy… …to bear… Our driving Desires for Connection Unabashed Affection Given up Like a bad habit… We’ve been Beaten down Pushed around Subjected to An emotional Drought Forced to live In this bleak Abyss Gone from Hopeful to Hopeless A harsh Transition now Standardized Realized as The Human Condition … Mar 2009 Very nice

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 02:36 PM
Wow! (((KIMMIE))) Come 'ere MM

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MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 02:38 PM
Hi Mom! Flowers! Thank you!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 03/01/09 02:42 PM
Wow! (((KIMMIE))) Come 'ere MM

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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/01/09 03:07 PM
The Human Condition Loneliness The human condition A state of being A walk thru perdition Our own special Damnation Alone amongst many Eyes searching Without finding any To meet Or greet … No laughter to follow Nothing but hollow Voices echoing off Buildings filled with Bodies walking yet Arriving nowhere No stories to tell No memories to share So afraid to reach out And touch It’s just Asking too much and The harsh inflection of A voiced rejection is Just too Heavy… …to bear… Our driving Desires for Connection Unabashed Affection Given up Like a bad habit… We’ve been Beaten down Pushed around Subjected to An emotional Drought Forced to live In this bleak Abyss Gone from Hopeful to Hopeless A harsh Transition now Standardized Realized as The Human Condition … Mar 2009 We live to be pushed around But never to LAY on this ground. We fight with everything we have inside. Because it is simply not our way to hide. So bring it all on, give me your best, I will show YOU I am NOT like all the rest! Your words and poem,,fit so well,, And your heart has never truly fell. Because it shines from here to the Heavens...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 03:49 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 03:50 PM
The Human Condition Loneliness The human condition A state of being A walk thru perdition Our own special Damnation Alone amongst many Eyes searching Without finding any To meet Or greet … No laughter to follow Nothing but hollow Voices echoing off Buildings filled with Bodies walking yet Arriving nowhere No stories to tell No memories to share So afraid to reach out And touch It’s just Asking too much and The harsh inflection of A voiced rejection is Just too Heavy… …to bear… Our driving Desires for Connection Unabashed Affection Given up Like a bad habit… We’ve been Beaten down Pushed around Subjected to An emotional Drought Forced to live In this bleak Abyss Gone from Hopeful to Hopeless A harsh Transition now Standardized Realized as The Human Condition … Mar 2009 We live to be pushed around But never to LAY on this ground. We fight with everything we have inside. Because it is simply not our way to hide. So bring it all on, give me your best, I will show YOU I am NOT like all the rest! Your words and poem,,fit so well,, And your heart has never truly fell. Because it shines from here to the Heavens... ((((T)))))

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sun 03/01/09 04:28 PM
(((Wiz))) we hope that what is painful and sometimes necessary energizes us to new heights one day.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sun 03/01/09 04:46 PM
Well put...We as humans, have so much to learn...

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Sun 03/01/09 04:49 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/01/09 07:38 PM
(((Wiz))) we hope that what is painful and sometimes necessary energizes us to new heights one day. Im sure it will darling. What's that old saying? What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger? Ainjel, thank you sweetpea~ Oh, ManO, dry dem tears and come 'ere~

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 03/01/09 09:05 PM
great write kind of makes me want to sing ...i'd like to teach ...the world to sing ...in perfect harmony......... actually it made me jot this down I stood on the top of that granite mountain shimmied to the outer most reach of the limb of emotional cause screamed at the top of my lungs and waited... there is no more sad a sound than an echo returned in silence and the tear inching its way down my hardened flesh serves as yet another reminder that i am all too human...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 03/02/09 07:09 AM
great write kind of makes me want to sing ...i'd like to teach ...the world to sing ...in perfect harmony......... actually it made me jot this down I stood on the top of that granite mountain shimmied to the outer most reach of the limb of emotional cause screamed at the top of my lungs and waited... there is no more sad a sound than an echo returned in silence and the tear inching its way down my hardened flesh serves as yet another reminder that i am all too human... Yes, you are all too human. And that is why we love you.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 03/02/09 11:02 AM
Strikingly True!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 03/02/09 06:14 PM
great write kind of makes me want to sing ...i'd like to teach ...the world to sing ...in perfect harmony......... actually it made me jot this down I stood on the top of that granite mountain shimmied to the outer most reach of the limb of emotional cause screamed at the top of my lungs and waited... there is no more sad a sound than an echo returned in silence and the tear inching its way down my hardened flesh serves as yet another reminder that i am all too human... Yes, you are all too human. And that is why we love you. awwwwwwww thank you...and here i thought it was because you needed another hand to swab the deck...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 03/02/09 06:26 PM
great write kind of makes me want to sing ...i'd like to teach ...the world to sing ...in perfect harmony......... actually it made me jot this down I stood on the top of that granite mountain shimmied to the outer most reach of the limb of emotional cause screamed at the top of my lungs and waited... there is no more sad a sound than an echo returned in silence and the tear inching its way down my hardened flesh serves as yet another reminder that i am all too human... Yes, you are all too human. And that is why we love you. awwwwwwww thank you...and here i thought it was because you needed another hand to swab the deck... Well, I do have my ulterior motives too.... <<----handing him a mop and bucket..