Topic: again
DirkGently's photo
Sat 02/28/09 08:52 PM
feel the breath of someone else
on your neck, has it been so long
did you forget how it felt
desire, desired
mutual need, want
something, a faded memory
brings it all in focus
a look, a stare
a match to a gallon of gas
it's been too long
it won't be long
it won't last long
but it will be
almost right
and you will soon be ready
to try again

no photo
Sat 02/28/09 09:51 PM
I like how you write...Wonderful..flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/01/09 11:13 PM

feel the breath of someone else
on your neck, has it been so long
did you forget how it felt
desire, desired
mutual need, want
something, a faded memory
brings it all in focus
a look, a stare
a match to a gallon of gas
it's been too long
it won't be long
it won't last long
but it will be
almost right
and you will soon be ready
to try again




drinks

iraceslowcars's photo
Mon 03/02/09 01:22 AM
bigsmile

tanyaann's photo
Mon 03/02/09 11:06 AM
flowerforyou Good Write!

DaveyB's photo
Mon 03/02/09 12:40 PM
Makes one... feel. Very nice

no photo
Mon 03/02/09 04:40 PM
you had me from the very beginning...great write:smile:

DirkGently's photo
Wed 03/04/09 03:18 AM
thanks all!