Topic: Insomnia
sensualsweet's photo
Thu 02/26/09 07:40 PM
Edited by sensualsweet on Thu 02/26/09 07:41 PM
Insomnia




I close my eyes, so tired now. But fast within my mind, The day unfolds before me, my mind to analyze.

I cannot sleep until it’s done, my mind won’t let me rest, Until it muddles through my thoughts, and puts them through the test.

The test of which I mention, is phenomenal to me. Somehow my conscience beckons, much deeper for to see.

I toss and turn – attempt to stop, the cycle that’ begun. I lie there thinking, wondering – ‘bout what was said and done.

Did I react correctly, to what I had to face? Did I create a problem, or crowd another’s space?

The standards I must live by were set some time ago, By life and its experience, that only memory knows.

I cannot close my eyes, Nor rest my weary head, Until my mind is satisfied, with what I’ve done and said.




Written by Sensualsweet 1986

no photo
Thu 02/26/09 07:43 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 02/26/09 07:58 PM

Insomnia




I close my eyes, so tired now. But fast within my mind, The day unfolds before me, my mind to analyze.

I cannot sleep until it’s done, my mind won’t let me rest, Until it muddles through my thoughts, and puts them through the test.

The test of which I mention, is phenomenal to me. Somehow my conscience beckons, much deeper for to see.

I toss and turn – attempt to stop, the cycle that’ begun. I lie there thinking, wondering – ‘bout what was said and done.

Did I react correctly, to what I had to face? Did I create a problem, or crowd another’s space?

The standards I must live by were set some time ago, By life and its experience, that only memory knows.

I cannot close my eyes, Nor rest my weary head, Until my mind is satisfied, with what I’ve done and said.




Written by Sensualsweet 1986





flowerforyou very niceflowerforyou

no photo
Thu 02/26/09 09:37 PM
I am glad I am not alone with insomnia...Awesome write... flowerforyou