Topic: Conjure me up a poem baby
RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 02:34 AM
It's quiet now
my ears are ringing
no Valentine
but many memories
still worth remembering

Three games of pool
two drinks per game
no one there
could remember me name

Drove too far to see a band
venue slash bar
went on first
we missed them
damn

huge breasts
invading my space
not sure if any of those women
really even had a face

Wet restroom floors
graffiti marked doors
drunken
man whores
violent female roars
liquers sweating out
of every persons pores

Last call!

A smile or two
is that for me
of course it's not
you can barely see
enjoy your hangover
and that hard ice tea
what's that baby..
oh
the restroom's over there

One last cigarette
no thanks I'm done
well everyone
it's been almost fun
but now that the room is spinning
I can almost taste that rum
again
stick with the soft drinks
that I'll recommend

But before I go
and this thought slips my mind
to everyone I missed
happy Valentine
and if you missed me
I was lost in a vast winding sea
yet none the less
happy V.D
sincerely me: RawB


:Roberto Loera
Feb.15 ©2009





no photo
Sun 02/15/09 02:38 AM
Happy Belated Valentines to you..Nice writings..

Moviemadness's photo
Sun 02/15/09 02:40 AM
RUM! woot woot!

Good stuff man. And happy late V day

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 09:38 AM

It's quiet now
my ears are ringing
no Valentine
but many memories
still worth remembering

Three games of pool
two drinks per game
no one there
could remember me name

Drove too far to see a band
venue slash bar
went on first
we missed them
damn

huge breasts
invading my space
not sure if any of those women
really even had a face

Wet restroom floors
graffiti marked doors
drunken
man whores
violent female roars
liquers sweating out
of every persons pores

Last call!

A smile or two
is that for me
of course it's not
you can barely see
enjoy your hangover
and that hard ice tea
what's that baby..
oh
the restroom's over there

One last cigarette
no thanks I'm done
well everyone
it's been almost fun
but now that the room is spinning
I can almost taste that rum
again
stick with the soft drinks
that I'll recommend

But before I go
and this thought slips my mind
to everyone I missed
happy Valentine
and if you missed me
I was lost in a vast winding sea
yet none the less
happy V.D
sincerely me: RawB


:Roberto Loera
Feb.15 ©2009







Sounds like every girls' Valentine dream (laughing)

So glad to see you survived the night Raw....Happy Belated Valentines Day and thank you for putting a smile on my face with this one~excellent~:heart:

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:27 PM

Happy Belated Valentines to you..Nice writings..
Thank you bigsmile

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:28 PM

RUM! woot woot!

Good stuff man. And happy late V day
Thank you and cheers drinker drinks

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:29 PM


It's quiet now
my ears are ringing
no Valentine
but many memories
still worth remembering

Three games of pool
two drinks per game
no one there
could remember me name

Drove too far to see a band
venue slash bar
went on first
we missed them
damn

huge breasts
invading my space
not sure if any of those women
really even had a face

Wet restroom floors
graffiti marked doors
drunken
man whores
violent female roars
liquers sweating out
of every persons pores

Last call!

A smile or two
is that for me
of course it's not
you can barely see
enjoy your hangover
and that hard ice tea
what's that baby..
oh
the restroom's over there

One last cigarette
no thanks I'm done
well everyone
it's been almost fun
but now that the room is spinning
I can almost taste that rum
again
stick with the soft drinks
that I'll recommend

But before I go
and this thought slips my mind
to everyone I missed
happy Valentine
and if you missed me
I was lost in a vast winding sea
yet none the less
happy V.D
sincerely me: RawB


:Roberto Loera
Feb.15 ©2009







Sounds like every girls' Valentine dream (laughing)

So glad to see you survived the night Raw....Happy Belated Valentines Day and thank you for putting a smile on my face with this one~excellent~:heart:
I'm glad I could make you smile bigsmile