Topic: hug
DirkGently's photo
Fri 02/13/09 09:48 PM
she said "i'm not sure if i should
kiss you or slug you"
neither would be appropriate
20 years late, unanswered calls
fear, for her and myself
so tall and strong yet she
wasn't grown up
i could see, even then, too alike
and like minded.
"it could've been you" i disagree
an act of desperation became a fire
blown out almost before the heat
could be felt
so now, by chance, two very different people
meet again, this time realizing
within seconds
that things would be best left alone.
and i got a hug.

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Fri 02/13/09 09:58 PM
I can relate...

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Fri 02/13/09 10:06 PM
Man, I thought this was going to be the Beatles' "She Said".... you don't know what you know, but I know that I think that I am..... etc.


OH-DI-WELL!!! Excellent write!!! drinker flowerforyou

DirkGently's photo
Sat 02/14/09 09:09 AM
thank you! real life is funnier than fiction..

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Sat 02/14/09 09:20 AM

an act of desperation became a fire
blown out almost before the heat
could be felt


very niceflowerforyou