Topic: do you know??
DHinkle's photo
Sun 02/08/09 09:58 PM
i wait in line
to get the news
they say all in time
still i wait in pews

im out of control
who will stop me
is it heart or soul
or my mind that haunts me

every path i try
i gain nothing
even if i cry
will i feel something

sleep does not come
to an unresting mind
when i look for the sum
im always far behind

you say im strong
yet i cannot stand
where did i go wrong
was this all planned

how do you weigh
the fruits of life
do you have to pay
for what is your right

anniebananie85's photo
Sun 02/08/09 10:04 PM
wow, that's really good! i like it alot bud!

no photo
Sun 02/08/09 10:09 PM

i wait in line
to get the news
they say all in time
still i wait in pews

im out of control
who will stop me
is it heart or soul
or my mind that haunts me

every path i try
i gain nothing
even if i cry
will i feel something

sleep does not come
to an unresting mind
when i look for the sum
im always far behind

you say im strong
yet i cannot stand
where did i go wrong
was this all planned

how do you weigh
the fruits of life
do you have to pay
for what is your right



Ah, but the question is....IS it your right?