Topic: Alive
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Sat 02/07/09 04:46 PM
A whisper of wind through the trees
reminiscent of fingers trailing through hair
as each leaf falls to its death
so is the end

Sun dawns on my soul
rays of warmth gather me up
holding me close but yet so far
only to fall beyond

Life breathes into me
eyes flicker in adjustment
lips slowly caressed
heart beating - alive..

tanyaann's photo
Sat 02/07/09 04:49 PM
Good Write! :thumbsup:

Misspharry1017's photo
Sat 02/07/09 04:54 PM
That was very pretty

d4tc's photo
Sat 02/07/09 06:52 PM
Edited by d4tc on Sat 02/07/09 06:52 PM
very soothing...
flowerforyou

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Sat 02/07/09 07:27 PM
Thankyou all you wonderful poets...With what you all write, it gives me incentive and creativity to write as well...flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Sat 02/07/09 07:46 PM

Thankyou all you wonderful poets...With what you all write, it gives me incentive and creativity to write as well...flowerforyou


bigsmile I love how people here just rub off on one another and inspire eachothers creativities. We are all the same yet so diverse in our own ways that our love for poetry is appreciated and respected as if you had two gangs that merged and said, ok, we are gangs, why are we fighting again'st eachother? so we are still a gang, just forces combined, forming, a community.

Our gangs rival.
Our minds. lol.

DaveyB's photo
Sat 02/07/09 07:48 PM
Very nice, it's improved my mood today a bit :smile: