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A whisper of wind through the trees
reminiscent of fingers trailing through hair as each leaf falls to its death so is the end Sun dawns on my soul rays of warmth gather me up holding me close but yet so far only to fall beyond Life breathes into me eyes flicker in adjustment lips slowly caressed heart beating - alive.. |
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Good Write!
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That was very pretty
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Edited by
d4tc
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Sat 02/07/09 06:52 PM
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very soothing...
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Thankyou all you wonderful poets...With what you all write, it gives me incentive and creativity to write as well...
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Thankyou all you wonderful poets...With what you all write, it gives me incentive and creativity to write as well... I love how people here just rub off on one another and inspire eachothers creativities. We are all the same yet so diverse in our own ways that our love for poetry is appreciated and respected as if you had two gangs that merged and said, ok, we are gangs, why are we fighting again'st eachother? so we are still a gang, just forces combined, forming, a community. Our gangs rival. Our minds. lol. |
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Very nice, it's improved my mood today a bit
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