Topic: updated my whole profile, pleas read it
marcel48041's photo
Fri 02/06/09 03:49 AM
Hi just wondering what you think of my profile after i updated it. pleas read it befor responding if you could..thanks a bunch :) lol

elwoodsully's photo
Fri 02/06/09 04:50 AM
looks good, but check your spelling.

no photo
Fri 02/06/09 05:17 AM
I'm surprised you don't have pics up with your guitar or violin!!!

Good profile, but it needs some grooming on the grammar, spelling and punctuation. Maybe copy & paste into a Word document and run it through spell check and grammar check.

Best wishes to you. You sound like a mature, interesting and fun fellow!! drinker

marcel48041's photo
Fri 02/06/09 05:59 AM
Thank you :) yeah the spelling and grammer is pretty bad, I have to edit it still. I was awake for like thirty hours when I updated it.
Im going to post a pic of my guitars and stuff soon, scaners not working that well, but thank you very much for the input:) lol

lilith401's photo
Fri 02/06/09 07:25 AM
There a lot of sentences written more than once, especially in the first part.

You talk about cheaters and liars, negativity spawns negativity. Be positive!

Kudos for putting forth effort into writing about yourself, but clean it up, ASAP!!!

Citizen_Joe's photo
Fri 02/06/09 09:34 PM

back for my batchers in science. I don’t like cheaters and


Bachelors?


liars, IV been down that road and hope to never return there.


The merits of veracity present themselves a better light than that of past mendacity.



guitar performance. I have my associates degree in applied science, and would later in life like to go back for my batchers in science. I don’t like cheaters and liars, iv been down that road and hope to never return there. I enjoy going


Looks like you also have a copy paste issue going on there too.

marcel48041's photo
Sat 02/07/09 09:09 AM
no copy and past, im working of fixing it, didnt sleep for two days when i made it, brain is burned out.