Topic: Reaper's Calls
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Wed 02/04/09 03:14 PM
oh, the walk trough
darkened doors
as death does play its
Haunting scores

upon the heart
not beating strong
once, but twice
and not for long

the silent gasp
as last breath draws
echo's near the
Reaper's Calls.............

Gar 2/4/9

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Wed 02/04/09 11:23 PM
Short and deathly sweet.

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Thu 02/05/09 04:31 PM
What he said up there ^^^...Oh and in the first sentence, is it 'through' or meant to be 'trough'..?

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Thu 02/05/09 05:57 PM

What he said up there ^^^...Oh and in the first sentence, is it 'through' or meant to be 'trough'..?


That would be through......I'm throwin my spell checker away...LOL....

Thanks

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Fri 02/06/09 03:39 PM


What he said up there ^^^...Oh and in the first sentence, is it 'through' or meant to be 'trough'..?


That would be through......I'm throwin my spell checker away...LOL....

Thanks


Still a great poem spelling mistake or not..

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Fri 02/06/09 04:53 PM
nice piece...two up-side down candlesticks for you!!