Topic: rear view
seeheartouch's photo
Tue 01/27/09 11:09 AM
walking back never works,
though i very much need it to

because what i find still lurks,
it's omething i want but cannot do

to purposefully make the final change,
and force the tower from my back

to at last collect and rearrange,
and pave the mud for a cleaner track

but when i'm there the weight grows heavy,
from the ghosts and phantoms that crawl the tower walls

the sickly waters have broken the levy,
and the demons sream "Welcome" while shoring up the walls


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Tue 01/27/09 11:12 AM
nice write flowerforyou

Jill298's photo
Tue 01/27/09 11:25 AM
I like it flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/27/09 01:09 PM

I like it flowerforyou
Meee toooo!

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Tue 01/27/09 01:39 PM
great visuals at the end.bigsmile flowerforyou