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I'm going to tell you a story It's been written before the only difference is it doesn't hurt to write it now No not anymore I used to have passionate kisses upside down our lips would fit together like zing-zang pieces ones that squeaked and made funny noises soft ones like full blooming petals from scarlet Roses The stars were brighter back then and we would pretend that all those stars were only ours but all good things must come to an end then all that's left is purple scars and only time to let them mend Time sped by when her and I saw eye to eye we only knew white lies and butterflies and.. love my heart fluttered as if a dove how naive was I to place all faith in love when a wraith named lust could easily blow me away like red hot sulfur had burned me to dust Didn't she know that only tin men rust I thought she knew that love was trust how can I go on selfishly she said I must Fine then.. Block out the light for now the world will only see me counting stars alone at night a ghost of mine left behind but I will be alright Come closer here and listen with both ears forget me now I wish to disappear so long our crystal Christmas's farewell our wishing well wishes and I will miss you most of all our passionate upside down kisses... By: Roberto Loera |
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I like that one from Mary Chapin Carpenter, oooooh passionate kisses from you!!
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I'm going to tell you a story It's been written before the only difference is it doesn't hurt to write it now No not anymore I used to have passionate kisses upside down our lips would fit together like zing-zang pieces ones that squeaked and made funny noises soft ones like full blooming petals from scarlet Roses The stars were brighter back then and we would pretend that all those stars were only ours but all good things must come to an end then all that's left is purple scars and only time to let them mend Time sped by when her and I saw eye to eye we only knew white lies and butterflies and.. love my heart fluttered as if a dove how naive was I to place all faith in love when a wraith named lust could easily blow me away like red hot sulfur had burned me to dust Didn't she know that only tin men rust I thought she knew that love was trust how can I go on selfishly she said I must Fine then.. Block out the light for now the world will only see me counting stars alone at night a ghost of mine left behind but I will be alright Come closer here and listen with both ears forget me now I wish to disappear so long our crystal Christmas's farewell our wishing well wishes and I will miss you most of all our passionate upside down kisses... By: Roberto Loera a soft warmth as lips meet and taste sweet anticipation a soft gasp tongues flickering fast lightly dancing briefly a heightened introduction to pleasures forthcoming is this ... ... our first kiss <<-----inserting big kissy face emoticon here.... |
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Very nice Roberto. I think many of us have been here and felt like this at some point. Lots of great lines in this piece.
My Fav, Didn't she know that only tin men rust. |
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very nice raw
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"i like that" |
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I'm going to tell you a story It's been written before the only difference is it doesn't hurt to write it now No not anymore I used to have passionate kisses upside down our lips would fit together like zing-zang pieces ones that squeaked and made funny noises soft ones like full blooming petals from scarlet Roses The stars were brighter back then and we would pretend that all those stars were only ours but all good things must come to an end then all that's left is purple scars and only time to let them mend Time sped by when her and I saw eye to eye we only knew white lies and butterflies and.. love my heart fluttered as if a dove how naive was I to place all faith in love when a wraith named lust could easily blow me away like red hot sulfur had burned me to dust Didn't she know that only tin men rust I thought she knew that love was trust how can I go on selfishly she said I must Fine then.. Block out the light for now the world will only see me counting stars alone at night a ghost of mine left behind but I will be alright Come closer here and listen with both ears forget me now I wish to disappear so long our crystal Christmas's farewell our wishing well wishes and I will miss you most of all our passionate upside down kisses... By: Roberto Loera a soft warmth as lips meet and taste sweet anticipation a soft gasp tongues flickering fast lightly dancing briefly a heightened introduction to pleasures forthcoming is this ... ... our first kiss <<-----inserting big kissy face emoticon here.... |
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Very nice Roberto. I think many of us have been here and felt like this at some point. Lots of great lines in this piece. My Fav, Didn't she know that only tin men rust. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was pretty happy with that line when it popped in my head. Thank you for reading |
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very nice raw |
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very nice, great ending.
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Well done, RawB.
Well done. |
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Aww. pretty
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I too love that tin man line, nicely done!
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