Topic: (deep breath)
GodsBeloved71's photo
Sun 01/18/09 03:58 PM
OK....go ahead. Constructive critism only please.

directandwrite's photo
Sun 01/18/09 04:00 PM
Cool profile! Welcome to Mingle! Good luck with your search! :smile: flowerforyou

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Sun 01/18/09 04:02 PM
You might want to add a little more about the type of man you seek. Other than that it looks good.

Welcome and good luck! flowerforyou


mchstiger06's photo
Sun 01/18/09 04:57 PM
your profile is great... only suggestion i have is to add something quirky about yourself that will catch a guy's attention. you seem so up-tight and straight forward... maybe add a small story to catch his attention. or maybe something you like that most girls don't... just something to differentiate you from others.

that is all. welcome to mingle :)

GodsBeloved71's photo
Sun 01/18/09 05:36 PM
Thanks for all your suggestions...anything else?

:smile:

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Sun 01/18/09 06:59 PM
-Remove the sentence "I expect the same in return."
-Remove "...this life almost demands it."

-I love your description of a perfect day.
-I love your profile pic. Great smile.
-I'd remove pic #3 as it is blurry.

I like that you have pics of you showing your whole body. It's nice to see a woman with curves who isn't afraid to flaunt it.

Maybe go into some more detail about you.

My two cents.

shades