be gentle

okay so your profile was good ... just a few suggestions..

more pictures will attract more males.

some of the things you say are kinda harsh... i suggest taking out the "curse" words. and re-wording what you are saying in certain things. i understand that you have certain things you're not for and dont want, but your profile makes you sound dominant and intimidating. we dont want that now do we?

welcome to mingle

nice

I will start out gentle




Welcome

Remove the last two paragraphs. You're coming across WAY to strong. You can get into those specifics IF and when you start getting to know someone on this site.

FYI, men do not want to read profiles that have phrases like "step off", "get lost", "keeping moving", "get over it", etc. It is a HUGE turn off.

Nothing wrong with being a confident person but you need to present it in a different light.

First paragraph is decent.

My advice is to have a paragraph about you and who you are. What kind of music, sports and movies? What do you like to write?

Your main profile photo should have you smiling. Men love to see a woman's eyes and her smile. Add a few other photos as well.

My two cents.