Topic: Taking a chance...open for constructive critism...
SweetSong83's photo
Fri 01/16/09 03:28 AM
Well, I figured I would take a leap and see what people thought of my profile...I haven't been on a site that people could forum about it...This should be interesting.
Be Gentle! LOL
Thanks
flowerforyou ~Shantel~

mekikis's photo
Fri 01/16/09 03:43 AM

You seems to be nice person.

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Fri 01/16/09 03:45 AM
Put up a different photo. Have it show your face head on and show off your eyes. Eyes and a smile is what I look at when viewing photos.

Remove the whole "not into head games, get married tomorrow, move on baby" stuff. Focus on what you want, not what you do NOT want. Too many people put that stuff on their profiles thinking it sounds cool or tough or whatever but it comes off as being rude and a big turn off.

Remove the whole divorcee thing as well. Talk about yourself and what you enjoy doing in life. You've got a ton of things listed in the interest area, so expand upon that. What kind of movies? What type of music? Etc.

Then list what type of person you are looking for. Do you want someone who is adventurous? intelligent? witty? What qualities to you look for in a man?

The whole point is to let the real you shine through. You aren't going for quantity but quality. Who cares if 10,000 respond to your profile if they have nothing in common with you? You narrow down your search with specifics and details.

Hope that helps.

glasses

SweetSong83's photo
Fri 01/16/09 04:07 AM
Thanks! I will do some fine tuning! I appreciate the input!

SweetSong83's photo
Fri 01/16/09 04:23 AM
Ok...I made some of the suggested updates....let me know what you think now! Please of course!

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Fri 01/16/09 04:44 AM
Edited by bryguy1972 on Fri 01/16/09 04:54 AM
Outstanding! Put up a photo of your dog and have a profile photo of you smiling. The one you put up is ok but a smile would be so much better. Also include a line of space between each paragraph. It makes it easier to read.

Now THAT'S the type of profile a man likes to read. Perfect!

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lilith401's photo
Fri 01/16/09 06:14 AM
I thought your profile was lovely.

Welcome to the site!

SweetSong83's photo
Sat 01/17/09 06:22 AM
Thanks so much! I am going to take some new pics today and hopefully I will find some great people to talk to on here! Starting over! WHOO HOO rofl