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Edited by
MsWizard
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Tue 01/13/09 05:05 PM
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Another year has gone by
Another day in my life In which mean dissections And foul deceptions have Added yet another gray hair To an already confused And bewildered head Another year to face alone Rather than mingled with An illusion disguised as Love’s confusion Confounding me Astounding me with Harsh and true Duplicity Should I even want to Try anymore? Or shall I simply Shut the door on those Lingering longings Which have lead me Nowhere but Into despair? Do I take a chance On yet another Short lived dance in the hopes That this tune … Yes, this tune! Will be the one To play out Sweetly Completely To the end? Will he finally Learn to sway and bend Instead of maintaining such rigidity Can I set him free? Or will he keep His heart in cold Captivity … … leaving me… Standing alone A solitary dancer Who knows only How to dance A minuet Choreographed For a loving duet? Another year gone by A time when I must Decide to try To keep living Giving Loving And hoping … Or is it finally Time to retire Those dreams That aspire To engulf and … Consume me… Leaving me lying Coldly in the ashes of time? |
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You sound sad in your writings, I hope everything is ok?
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You sound sad in your writings, I hope everything is ok? Yes Guardian, thank you for asking.  It's just another night of reflection....
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 Good work!
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Good work!
Thank you sweetheart ~ 
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Another year has gone by Another day in my life In which mean dissections And foul deceptions have Added yet another gray hair To an already confused And bewildered head Another year to face alone Rather than mingled with An illusion disguised as Love’s confusion Confounding me Astounding me with Harsh and true Duplicity Should I even want to Try anymore? Or shall I simply Shut the door on those Lingering longings Which have lead me Nowhere but Into despair? Do I take a chance On yet another Short lived dance in the hopes That this tune … Yes, this tune! Will be the one To play out Sweetly Completely To the end? Will he finally Learn to sway and bend Instead of maintaining such rigidity Can I set him free? Or will he keep His heart in cold Captivity … … leaving me… Standing alone A solitary dancer Who knows only How to dance A minuet Choreographed For a loving duet? Another year gone by A time when I must Decide to try To keep living Giving Loving And hoping … Or is it finally Time to retire Those dreams That aspire To engulf and … Consume me… Leaving me lying Coldly in the ashes of time?
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Another year has gone by Another day in my life In which mean dissections And foul deceptions have Added yet another gray hair To an already confused And bewildered head Another year to face alone Rather than mingled with An illusion disguised as Love’s confusion Confounding me Astounding me with Harsh and true Duplicity Should I even want to Try anymore? Or shall I simply Shut the door on those Lingering longings Which have lead me Nowhere but Into despair? Do I take a chance On yet another Short lived dance in the hopes That this tune … Yes, this tune! Will be the one To play out Sweetly Completely To the end? Will he finally Learn to sway and bend Instead of maintaining such rigidity Can I set him free? Or will he keep His heart in cold Captivity … … leaving me… Standing alone A solitary dancer Who knows only How to dance A minuet Choreographed For a loving duet? Another year gone by A time when I must Decide to try To keep living Giving Loving And hoping … Or is it finally Time to retire Those dreams That aspire To engulf and … Consume me… Leaving me lying Coldly in the ashes of time?
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Beautiful write, but it is a little sad!!
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Beautiful write, but it is a little sad!!
Yes, it probably is darling, Im sorry. As I said, it's a night of reflection..... |
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Beautiful write, but it is a little sad!!
Yes, it probably is darling, Im sorry. As I said, it's a night of reflection.....
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Beautiful write, but it is a little sad!!
Yes, it probably is darling, Im sorry. As I said, it's a night of reflection.....
you too my lamb
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To one of my favorite writers. I wish you a very
Happy Birthday
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To one of my favorite writers. I wish you a very Happy Birthday
ohhhhhh you sweet thang. how did you know??? |
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sorry Wizzy, he's not going to learn to sway and bend
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I read into your write
 
I just did my bday poem last week so the birthday thing is still fresh in my head. 
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A++++
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Oh Lovely One,, First off such depth within you have shared with all of us,,
Now come,, yes closer,, When I look into your Eyes I see Beauty, strength and hope,, Filled with Faith, Love and giving,, You my Dear deserve all that fills you with magic and warmth and my wish for you upon this cool Winter night of your Day of Birth,, Peace, love and the deepest of Spirit filling your Soul with warmth I so love you and am so blessed for your Birth has brought me a Sister, a friend yet most of all my Strength Muahhhhhhhhhhhhh
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sorry Wizzy, he's not going to learn to sway and bend
That rat bastard. If you love me at all you will go beat his sorry butt.....!!! |
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I read into your write
I just did my bday poem last week so the birthday thing is still fresh in my head.
Oh so you're not just a pretty face, you're smart too!!!!
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A++++
Thank you Raw...I've read your work tonight and will be commenting...I think we have much in common....
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