Topic: Rate my Update
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Sun 01/11/09 10:51 PM
New tagline and to "her" blurb.

good, bad? Give me your feedback

-Thanks

Xer0's photo
Sun 01/11/09 10:53 PM
It's real sweet but you might be giving off the impression that you'll fall in love with whoever will have you and that doesn't bode well with the lady folk. It takes the piss out of it.

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 01/11/09 11:21 PM

New tagline and to "her" blurb.

good, bad? Give me your feedback

-Thanks
smitten It arouses mesmitten

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Sun 01/11/09 11:22 PM

It's real sweet but you might be giving off the impression that you'll fall in love with whoever will have you and that doesn't bode well with the lady folk. It takes the piss out of it.


good point maybe some slight adjustment needed to it then

PacificStar48's photo
Mon 01/12/09 12:20 AM
This is a pretty good profile. Don't know how flattering the photos are. It is hard to see your face in the shadows and looks like you have a really great smile. Maybe show some pictures of you doing things you enjoy. Good Luck.