Topic: half a day
erlymourninsun's photo
Sat 01/10/09 12:06 AM
half a day.
till the night is done.
questions remain.
and the fear has begun.

the child weaps his tears of rage.
through the book of life.
finds a brand new page.

its the little things that,
mean so much.
like a mothers kiss,
or a womans touch.

they say beauty comes.
and beauty goes.
in the purest of hearts.
that beauty will show.

no photo
Sat 01/10/09 12:09 AM
Really Really Nice - I enjoyed:thumbsup:

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 01/10/09 12:19 AM
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no photo
Sat 01/10/09 12:26 AM
drinker Half a day, all the way...come on here.
To write, laugh, and play...I just wanted to say.
Good job on the poem,,but its lousy pay,loldrinker

Jess642's photo
Sat 01/10/09 01:15 PM
This one has an impact... this one expresses... clipped and concise.... this one... is worth 'half a day'...:wink:


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