Topic: i need some feedback here please
hsax's photo
Fri 01/09/09 07:22 AM
i asked if anyone could tell me what they think of my profile and you have looked at it but no one has given any feedback is there any reason why?

JenniferAld's photo
Fri 01/09/09 08:53 AM
I would add more photo's... Ones from a different time.. not just from that one photo shoot.

no photo
Fri 01/09/09 09:27 PM
I don't know, it says you signed up yesterday. Not very long ago.

Filmfreek's photo
Fri 01/09/09 09:57 PM
It looks fine to me. My only suggestion would be add a couple more pics of yourself.

PacificStar48's photo
Fri 01/09/09 10:29 PM
For a cute gal with pretty tats those are really unflattering photos. The tat shots seem kind of like CSI shots not a connected person.

Reading the text you feel like you are jumping all over the place. Outline your thoughts and maybe restructure you sentences so fewer start with "I". Make paragraphs.

Talk to the guy who has what you want and don't waste time on the ones you don't want. Talk about your interests and lifestyle. You are a stay at home Mom so there must be something about it that you like. Keep it positive.

Do a serious go over for spelling and typos.