Topic: a 12 y/os wisdom
sweetxstacy's photo
Wed 04/18/07 07:21 PM
My daughter wrote this as her way of handling the Tech tragedy. I think
she said what a lot of us have trouble expressing. She gave me
permission to share it.

__The Unexpected__

Students sitting in a class
Listening to the teacher's facts.
They thought it was a normal day
Nothing different, no disarray.
Suddenly happy thoughts are retired
as a gunman came in and fired.
Panic struck like a lightening bolt.
They searched and searched who was at fault.
He'd already gone out the door.
His whereabouts they were not sure.
Dreams shattered forevermore,
innocent bodies lifeless on the floor.
32 lives stolen away.
A single man took them that pointless day.
His own life also gone.
Reality crashed down like an atomic bomb.
What could have made him cause that fright?
We all know it just isn't right.
Such a sad way to break the silence.
They say expect the unexpected...
I say just end the violence.

--brandy a.

La_Esperanza's photo
Wed 04/18/07 07:33 PM
Your daughter is an excellent poet and also has a very strong command on
words at such a young age. I encourage you to help her develop this
talent!!!

creationsfire's photo
Wed 04/18/07 07:44 PM
Ditto!!!!!!!!!!flowerforyou

smilingeyes_976's photo
Wed 04/18/07 07:50 PM
tell her what a great writer she is and encourage her to continue
writing........ Wonderful.......

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/18/07 07:55 PM
Amazing,, Your daughter has a beautiful gift,,, and an incredible
heart.. flowerforyou

sweetxstacy's photo
Fri 04/20/07 03:12 PM
Thank you all for your comments. Brandy is a very special, passionate
child.....I only wish she didn't have reasons to think about these
things at all.

twosteper's photo
Fri 04/20/07 03:36 PM
ya got that right sweetstacy

i myself hurt when i hear kids killin kids

but she does have a gift

tell her to move on with it

do what it takes to get all that talent to come forward

she will blow everyones mind


party on...drinker drinker drinker drinker

aria_rose's photo
Fri 04/20/07 03:45 PM
Proves she is in contact with herself and her emotions and that she is
not blocking them and that is a great wonderful thing xstacy!


Keep supporting and encouraging her!

Aria

sweetxstacy's photo
Fri 04/20/07 05:51 PM
(((((aria)))) I missed you sweetey!!!!!!