What do i deserve,
What can i give,
Could i preserve,
the life you live.

You build me up,
you tell me i can,
You give me what you have,
you give me your heart.

I try so hard,
but still i fall,
I've been dealt this card,
but still i call.

You give me this crown,
tell me to wear it high,
But still i let you down,
All you can say is why.

I cant be trusted,
It wont end like you think,
Your heart will be busted,
You will smell my true stink.

You tell me what i can gain,
and all the joys that are life,
All you will feel is pain,
I will never make this right.

Run away while you can,
Dont trust me with your heart,
I will throw it in the can,
And tear all of your joys apart.

huh, only 11 views

if u don like it tell me, critisism is just as good as a compliment!!!

Your poem is great. Lots of people read and don't comment. I've had poems with no comment or poems with 3 pages. Sometimes it has to do with the time of day or how many are on. Ask yourself how many poems do you read that you don't comment on? It happens to everyone.

"What do i deserve,..."
Probably a lot more than you think!


"What can i give,..."
Probably a lot more than you believe yourself to know!

Keep it up Dude I judge my work posted here by the views not by the comments

thanks guys/girls