Topic: my tribute to the ones we soldiers leave behind
thatamrericanguy's photo
Mon 12/29/08 02:08 PM
Even soldiers cry.


A young man packs his bags,
it's almost time to go.
A young girl curls up crying,
but, he'll never know...

He checks over his equipment
everything's in place.
She's staring, at his picture
while mascara runs down her face.

Walking towards the door,
a bible, lies in sight
several words,
and solemn prayers
the youngman does recite.

The young girl heard a noise,
someone at her door,
the young man left a letter,
a letter, nothing more...

The young girl tore it open,
Tears, soon filled her eyes,
for inside, this little letter said
'even soliders cry'

njmom05's photo
Mon 12/29/08 02:09 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
That made me cry!

sweetnsassyntall's photo
Mon 12/29/08 02:12 PM
:cry: Aaawww that was so sad but a very good poem. Thank you for sharing! flowerforyou

thatamrericanguy's photo
Mon 12/29/08 02:13 PM
Im sorry to make you cry, honestly.
But I am glad that my work did evoke emotion ^.^
many people dont realize the stress that the ones we leave behind have to endure. this poem was just to show my appreciation to the ones who stand by me.

njmom05's photo
Mon 12/29/08 02:15 PM

Im sorry to make you cry, honestly.
But I am glad that my work did evoke emotion ^.^
many people dont realize the stress that the ones we leave behind have to endure. this poem was just to show my appreciation to the ones who stand by me.

Its okay, I cry easily. I know how it feels, I have friends who have been overseas for quite awhile and I pray for them everyday! I miss hearing from them, I wonder all the time if they are safe and are okay. I actually did a penpal adoption program for military people, but sadly, I never heard back from any of them. I know they move around so frequently, but I tried.

God bless our troops!flowerforyou

horsegirl55's photo
Mon 12/29/08 03:57 PM
Very nice!!!! A real tear jerker! Wrote with a lot of feeling.flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 12/30/08 07:02 AM
Yes...

Beautiful write flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 12/30/08 07:05 AM
I'm not ashamed to admit it also brought a tear to my eye.

Very touching.

thatamrericanguy's photo
Tue 12/30/08 07:12 AM
I am so very glad that you all enjoy my writing. As a young man in my profession, poetry isnt something generally approved of, many would actually make lewd and crude comments. I thank you all for your compliments, and as long as you continue to read the work that I post, I will keep writing it.

no photo
Tue 12/30/08 07:31 AM
quite moving and keep them comingflowerforyou flowerforyou

MrsKaters's photo
Tue 12/30/08 07:36 AM
very emotional and moving. thank you for sharing this.