Topic: my tribute to the ones we soldiers leave behind | |
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Even soldiers cry.
A young man packs his bags, it's almost time to go. A young girl curls up crying, but, he'll never know... He checks over his equipment everything's in place. She's staring, at his picture while mascara runs down her face. Walking towards the door, a bible, lies in sight several words, and solemn prayers the youngman does recite. The young girl heard a noise, someone at her door, the young man left a letter, a letter, nothing more... The young girl tore it open, Tears, soon filled her eyes, for inside, this little letter said 'even soliders cry' |
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That made me cry! |
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Aaawww that was so sad but a very good poem. Thank you for sharing!
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Im sorry to make you cry, honestly.
But I am glad that my work did evoke emotion ^.^ many people dont realize the stress that the ones we leave behind have to endure. this poem was just to show my appreciation to the ones who stand by me. |
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Im sorry to make you cry, honestly. But I am glad that my work did evoke emotion ^.^ many people dont realize the stress that the ones we leave behind have to endure. this poem was just to show my appreciation to the ones who stand by me. Its okay, I cry easily. I know how it feels, I have friends who have been overseas for quite awhile and I pray for them everyday! I miss hearing from them, I wonder all the time if they are safe and are okay. I actually did a penpal adoption program for military people, but sadly, I never heard back from any of them. I know they move around so frequently, but I tried. God bless our troops! |
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Very nice!!!! A real tear jerker! Wrote with a lot of feeling.
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Yes...
Beautiful write |
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I'm not ashamed to admit it also brought a tear to my eye.
Very touching. |
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I am so very glad that you all enjoy my writing. As a young man in my profession, poetry isnt something generally approved of, many would actually make lewd and crude comments. I thank you all for your compliments, and as long as you continue to read the work that I post, I will keep writing it.
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quite moving and keep them coming
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very emotional and moving. thank you for sharing this.
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