earlier i posted somethin on here, but i wrote more to it so here is the whole thing!!!


ive been alone
ive been with you
but in the end
does it make me true
the lies and truths
no meaning at all
all that matters
is how hard you fall

can you take it away
can you make me feel
would you tell me to stay
would you help me heal

this is my heart
its been treated with only abuse
dont tear it apart
will you set it loose

what is left
when all you have is nothing
was this a test
or was this really something

time and time again
all i feel is pain
is there anything to gain
from standing in the rain

ive seen the world
ive looked in your eyes
you tell me that im cold
and still i believe your lies

i look desperately to find
the real truths in our lives
are they really all that kind
or again is it all lies

so i ask again

what is left
when all you have is nothing
was this a test
or was this really something

good job

thanks man

I think we have all been down that road...you describe it well

thanks

I think we can all relate to that on some level.

hey we need to talk later right now i have to go but make sure you get on for a couple mins this evening i have somethin for you lol

Very nice... Thank you

very good, Daryl

felt it all, loved the ending

felt everything you wrote. We all have one way or another. Well written

Great Write.

hey thanks everyone for your replies this is the first time i really wrote anything(well outside of school) and its nice to no it didnt completely suck