Topic: just thinkin | |
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im not sure if this is a poem or wat it is really.
i was jus thinkin last night and this is what ended up on paper. I've been alone, I've been with you. But in the end, does it make me true. the lies and truths, no meaning at all. all that matters, is how hard you fall. Can you take it away, can you make me feel. Would you tell me to stay, would you help me heal. This is my heart, its been treated with only abuse. Don't tear it apart, will you set it loose. What is left, when all you have is nothing. Was this a test, or was this really something. |
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I feel your pain. Thank you for sharing this. You will get through it even when times are the toughest.
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I would say its a Poem...and a very touching one too
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thank you
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It's a poem full of feeling
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i added to it you can find it in "the rest of it"
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I loved it.
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