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Awakened From You
Awakened from a slumber From the world in which I lived. Your mere existance there Has left a darkened empty gift. The battles fought within our mind Now seperates as two. I wonder really now If that's what you set to do. The past is but a remnant. Your pain can't cause me harm. For now I understand the beast That caught me in her charm. You said I seemed so distant, Last time you spoke to me. What good is left to past If always lived in memory? You want to know my heart, Yet you were blinded to it's source, You thought you knew what drove me, Yet your torment took it's course. You disemboweled my kindness And fought my attempts to care, You stabbed the heart that loved you And thought I was unaware. Awakened to the present, Revived by subtile tones of love. Rebuilding what was broken, My heart stirs but not enough. She holds me in her arms And cures what's dead inside, Within her aura shining There's no where I can hide. She took me to her heart, Something you could never do, It's there her love does comfort me, Protecting me from you. She accepts the good and bad And attempts to stop the pain. After meeting who you are, She vows I won't be hurt again. What you need to understand Will only come with time. After you stop blaming All the others for your crime. You use my words against me And silence what I feel, Restrained from what is natural Till my heart's refused to heal. One thing you can't now understand Is why you think you've failed. You can't corrupt what's pure in heart Or those whom seek for love unveiled. Smiles now are broadened, For our spirits now are one. Her heart has grafted into mine Untangling what you've done. Fadedspirit 12/28/2008 |
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nice work faded
good to see you my friend... |
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Awakened From You Awakened from a slumber From the world in which I lived. Your mere existance there Has left a darkened empty gift. The battles fought within our mind Now seperates as two. I wonder really now If that's what you set to do. The past is but a remnant. Your pain can't cause me harm. For now I understand the beast That caught me in her charm. You said I seemed so distant, Last time you spoke to me. What good is left to past If always lived in memory? You want to know my heart, Yet you were blinded to it's source, You thought you knew what drove me, Yet your torment took it's course. You disemboweled my kindness And fought my attempts to care, You stabbed the heart that loved you And thought I was unaware. Awakened to the present, Revived by subtile tones of love. Rebuilding what was broken, My heart stirs but not enough. She holds me in her arms And cures what's dead inside, Within her aura shining There's no where I can hide. She took me to her heart, Something you could never do, It's there her love does comfort me, Protecting me from you. She accepts the good and bad And attempts to stop the pain. After meeting who you are, She vows I won't be hurt again. What you need to understand Will only come with time. After you stop blaming All the others for your crime. You use my words against me And silence what I feel, Restrained from what is natural Till my heart's refused to heal. One thing you can't now understand Is why you think you've failed. You can't corrupt what's pure in heart Or those whom seek for love unveiled. Smiles now are broadened, For our spirits now are one. Her heart has grafted into mine Untangling what you've done. Fadedspirit 12/28/2008 |
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enlightment is a soothing pause
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Thanks Kc. Sad thing with this one is, I tied up all my emotional garbage with this one. Wonder what I'll be writing about next....lol. Kinda seems a befitting time for me though. Knotting up
The loose ends for the end of the year and beginning a new journey, somewhere I've never been, into the new year. Good to see you too my friend. |
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Very nice
Thanks MirrorMirror. |
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enlightment is a soothing pause Very true LAMom. Thanks. |
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Thanks Kc. Sad thing with this one is, I tied up all my emotional garbage with this one. Wonder what I'll be writing about next....lol. Kinda seems a befitting time for me though. Knotting up The loose ends for the end of the year and beginning a new journey, somewhere I've never been, into the new year. Good to see you too my friend. yes, a good time to do this...wherever it takes you i'm sure we will enjoy reading about it...happy new beginnings!!!...i mean... year!!! |
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Same goes for you, my friend. Have a happy new year and new beginning kc.
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Ah yes........ to NEW beginnings and many blessings in the coming year! Nice poem!
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quite nicely done-time for your to start anew and have some fun in the year ahead.
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nice work faded good to see you my friend... |
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Awww, thanks Mystique.
Thanks PKD. Thanks DKW and good to see you again too. A new spirit I am becomming. |
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