Topic: Awakened From You
Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:07 PM
Awakened From You

Awakened from a slumber
From the world in which I lived.
Your mere existance there
Has left a darkened empty gift.

The battles fought within our mind
Now seperates as two.
I wonder really now
If that's what you set to do.

The past is but a remnant.
Your pain can't cause me harm.
For now I understand the beast
That caught me in her charm.

You said I seemed so distant,
Last time you spoke to me.
What good is left to past
If always lived in memory?

You want to know my heart,
Yet you were blinded to it's source,
You thought you knew what drove me,
Yet your torment took it's course.

You disemboweled my kindness
And fought my attempts to care,
You stabbed the heart that loved you
And thought I was unaware.

Awakened to the present,
Revived by subtile tones of love.
Rebuilding what was broken,
My heart stirs but not enough.

She holds me in her arms
And cures what's dead inside,
Within her aura shining
There's no where I can hide.

She took me to her heart,
Something you could never do,
It's there her love does comfort me,
Protecting me from you.

She accepts the good and bad
And attempts to stop the pain.
After meeting who you are,
She vows I won't be hurt again.

What you need to understand
Will only come with time.
After you stop blaming
All the others for your crime.

You use my words against me
And silence what I feel,
Restrained from what is natural
Till my heart's refused to heal.

One thing you can't now understand
Is why you think you've failed.
You can't corrupt what's pure in heart
Or those whom seek for love unveiled.

Smiles now are broadened,
For our spirits now are one.
Her heart has grafted into mine
Untangling what you've done.

Fadedspirit 12/28/2008

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:10 PM
nice work faded

good to see you my friend...drinker

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:11 PM

Awakened From You

Awakened from a slumber
From the world in which I lived.
Your mere existance there
Has left a darkened empty gift.

The battles fought within our mind
Now seperates as two.
I wonder really now
If that's what you set to do.

The past is but a remnant.
Your pain can't cause me harm.
For now I understand the beast
That caught me in her charm.

You said I seemed so distant,
Last time you spoke to me.
What good is left to past
If always lived in memory?

You want to know my heart,
Yet you were blinded to it's source,
You thought you knew what drove me,
Yet your torment took it's course.

You disemboweled my kindness
And fought my attempts to care,
You stabbed the heart that loved you
And thought I was unaware.

Awakened to the present,
Revived by subtile tones of love.
Rebuilding what was broken,
My heart stirs but not enough.

She holds me in her arms
And cures what's dead inside,
Within her aura shining
There's no where I can hide.

She took me to her heart,
Something you could never do,
It's there her love does comfort me,
Protecting me from you.

She accepts the good and bad
And attempts to stop the pain.
After meeting who you are,
She vows I won't be hurt again.

What you need to understand
Will only come with time.
After you stop blaming
All the others for your crime.

You use my words against me
And silence what I feel,
Restrained from what is natural
Till my heart's refused to heal.

One thing you can't now understand
Is why you think you've failed.
You can't corrupt what's pure in heart
Or those whom seek for love unveiled.

Smiles now are broadened,
For our spirits now are one.
Her heart has grafted into mine
Untangling what you've done.

Fadedspirit 12/28/2008
flowerforyou Very niceflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:15 PM
enlightment is a soothing pause

flowers flowers

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:21 PM
Thanks Kc. Sad thing with this one is, I tied up all my emotional garbage with this one. Wonder what I'll be writing about next....lol. Kinda seems a befitting time for me though. Knotting up
The loose ends for the end of the year and beginning a new journey, somewhere I've never been, into the new year.

Good to see you too my friend.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:22 PM
flowerforyou Very niceflowerforyou

Thanks MirrorMirror.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:23 PM

enlightment is a soothing pause

flowers flowers


Very true LAMom. Thanks. flowers

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:32 PM

Thanks Kc. Sad thing with this one is, I tied up all my emotional garbage with this one. Wonder what I'll be writing about next....lol. Kinda seems a befitting time for me though. Knotting up
The loose ends for the end of the year and beginning a new journey, somewhere I've never been, into the new year.

Good to see you too my friend.





yes, a good time to do this...wherever it takes you i'm sure we will enjoy reading about it...happy new beginnings!!!...i mean... year!!!

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 12/28/08 09:36 PM
Same goes for you, my friend. Have a happy new year and new beginning kc.drinker

Mystique42's photo
Mon 12/29/08 07:34 AM
Ah yes........drinker to NEW beginnings and many blessings in the coming year! Nice poem!flowers

no photo
Mon 12/29/08 08:54 AM
quite nicely done-time for your to start anew and have some fun in the year ahead.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/29/08 09:42 AM

nice work faded

good to see you my friend...drinker
I, "second that emotion!"

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/31/08 10:42 PM
Awww, thanks Mystique. flowers

Thanks PKD. happy

Thanks DKW and good to see you again too. :smile: A new spirit I am becomming.