This is from the Creative Challenge Group on Multiply, also a part of the pathos collection which I hope to publish someday soon.


Shallow Wall

I’m going to jump start my soul today
With brazen words and disfunctionality
I won’t resist the bold brilliance of my exhaustive mind
Instead I will mutiny and dangle the fattest thoughts there in
Maybe confuse a muse
Mystify a secret sensation,
Something like dueling two nations
One on the right
One on the left
A road that goes to no where
In between the fractured shadow
My instincts are feeling touchy today
Don’t want to go down…that way,
It is not necessary after all,
Got a foreign dialect akin to me
Angry and indecent and injured
Too much to swallow,
Hallow me a wave,
I want to wall in my raven dreams
I’m the enigma
That isn’t what it seems
I’ll dally for a while
But you had better dilly out the way
‘cause today seems like a vital effort
To have a dual personality.

By Veronica Garcia 12-19-08 From the Pathos Collection

I find this an amazing piece of work. Each line seems to bring it's own image to my mind. Thanks for sharing, great work

Your comment is very appreicaited, I am so glad you like it, smiles. Wishing you a warm cozy day. Bless you and yours

very nice

Thank you so much. May I visit your page Pkd? to say hello.