Topic: what am i going to do
jimz's photo
Thu 12/18/08 03:40 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 12/18/08 03:44 PM
what am i going to do
i busted my headphones
what am i going to do
i havent written a poem
without blaring rock music
blaring in my head
in so long
how am i going to write
with me and the other me
and maybe some of you
in my thoughts

what am i going to do
typing faster
than i ever typed
im scared to stop
the poem aint finished
i can feel when a poem is finished
never by words
will this
be different

i hate this attitude
of having an attitude
that im trying to extinguish
pounding my head with positive thoughts
i dont like when my mind strays
and i hear something negative
pop into my head
like a bad balloon
on top of falling balloon
on top of the sky
impossible
i am impossible

when do i stop typing
i dont like the letters
i dont like letters
i hate letters
i hate words
there are no words
in the spirit world
love is not in the dictionary
you feel love
and with only my soul alive
oh yeah
im going to feel
i feel a heaviness
coming on
i think its time
to stop

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 12/18/08 03:44 PM
:banana: good job:banana:

no photo
Thu 12/18/08 03:56 PM
not bad for a white boy lolbigsmile

beauty314's photo
Thu 12/18/08 04:01 PM
I love that hectic flavor of freewrite...well done :heart:

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/18/08 08:13 PM
Jimmy :heart:

I hope that there is a never ending flow of whispers... I so love it when you whisper and share

Hugs


jimz's photo
Fri 12/19/08 12:14 PM

not bad for a white boy lolbigsmile


who's white:tongue: my mom is french?irish, my father, well, viva la razaglasses

no photo
Fri 12/19/08 04:12 PM
I love getting a glimpse of your thoughts- rock ondrinker drinker

no photo
Fri 12/19/08 05:14 PM

what am i going to do
i busted my headphones
what am i going to do
i havent written a poem
without blaring rock music
blaring in my head
in so long
how am i going to write
with me and the other me
and maybe some of you
in my thoughts

what am i going to do
typing faster
than i ever typed
im scared to stop
the poem aint finished
i can feel when a poem is finished
never by words
will this
be different

i hate this attitude
of having an attitude
that im trying to extinguish
pounding my head with positive thoughts
i dont like when my mind strays
and i hear something negative
pop into my head
like a bad balloon
on top of falling balloon
on top of the sky
impossible
i am impossible

when do i stop typing
i dont like the letters
i dont like letters
i hate letters
i hate words
there are no words
in the spirit world
love is not in the dictionary
you feel love
and with only my soul alive
oh yeah
im going to feel
i feel a heaviness
coming on
i think its time
to stop


Buy new headphones.:wink: