Topic: The Waves
d4tc's photo
Wed 12/17/08 09:26 AM
One ship to ship

aquintanceship to friendship
fellowship turned relationship
lies become truth
hotel receipt proof
ending a relationship
from fellowship
Docking on a short lived
friendship
inseperably growing
out of the aquintanceship
I delve dipped
as she skipped
us
never saying
we
she creeped
I weeped
regreting sails
her tazer set to fail
"Don't taze me Ho!"
I should have said
without regret
before she did
the unthinkably
thought
decrepified by lies
loose
she speaks
loose
she seeks
loose
she needs
someone to put down
over empowering herself
with something to hold down
her ego she seeks
the newness
I have tried to warn some of this
newness
that goes against the grain of
comfort
and how it's inevitable after time

If I was a good man
I would tell her new man
not to turn the metal
key in her back
I wound her up enough
I would say
what a doll
here you go
she is a loose one
she is all yours
here is
the captains hat
grab it
i no longer need it
you can have it
this battleship
full of explosives
watch out for her
sidecannons
she is a trained
professional
a real gunner
a lucy goosey
Someone I know
now
better than ever
never needing
to want to battle
aboard her stinky
sinking ship

Good Luck

LAMom's photo
Wed 12/17/08 09:50 AM
set sail the ship let the wide open ( see's ) take in the view and in time maybe this ship shall dock,,,

Your brilliantly filled with compassion flowers

no photo
Thu 12/18/08 03:38 AM
smooth sailing ahead, gail wind forces not expected -very nice Jflowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Thu 12/18/08 12:32 PM
yeahbigsmile

lilwick86's photo
Thu 12/18/08 02:42 PM
Wow, sounds somewhat familiar, sail into the dawn, there is a new day rising. Remember, the sun always rises. flowerforyou :thumbsup: shades