Topic: NIght Rain
Savant's photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:20 PM
Night rain in the city….
Across the mists
of neon streets,
cold wind gusts
in watery waves.

My reflection in the street….
A man in a raincoat
flowing down manholes
into underground waters.

Past loves gone by….
Left to surge down drains
into darkness,
or collect in quiet puddles
waiting for the sun….

Tears and raindrops
bead my glasses….
Seeing fragments
of a lost love falling
from the cold night sky’

and trickling
into empty streets….

karmafury's photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:23 PM
WoW! Great!

no photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:33 PM
thats cool

scttrbrain's photo
Sat 04/14/07 07:29 PM
Nice...
Kat

LAMom's photo
Sat 04/14/07 07:31 PM
Beautiful flowerforyou