Topic: The Music Fades
Savant's photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:17 PM
Suddenly….
all music fades to
dissonant tinkling …
all beauty ebbs
in murky shadows…

True love now
a laugh…
and God but
just a lie…

Now poetic words
become as scarlet
wounds
My pen slices shreds
of all I loved…

The sun still shines warm
in the summer sky…

But why have I grown
so cold…?

karmafury's photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:21 PM
Wonderfully written.

EmotionalTurbulance's photo
Sat 04/14/07 02:49 PM
very good!

thank you.