Alone we sit,
Just we two,
In the candlelit night.
The waiting is through.

We gaze at each other.
The passion grows deep.
Our lips meet in pleasure.
My heart skips a beat.

Our tongues intermingle.
Our mouths open wide.
We draw close to each other
As we fall on our sides.

Slowly my hand
Up your back goes.
Your shirt falls to the floor.
Where? Nobody knows.

One by one slowly
All our clothes melt away.
This new passion engulfs us
And will never decay.

We lay there uncovered,
Bare in the bed.
Each kissing the other.
All doubting has fled.

I stroke my hand
Down the small of your back.
You moan loud in pleasure
As I retrace my track.

I kiss your neck softly,
And your bare shoulder blade.
I feel the rise of your breath
As with you I've played.

I feel your hand gently
Move down my spine
And come to rest on my bottom.
Now I know that you're mine.

The raging within us
Can be held back no more.
You want me inside you
Like never before.

You roll on your back
As I roll on top.
I enter you slowly
But you know I can't stop.

The fever takes over.
I know you feel it too.
You moan and you quiver
As I make love to you.

Our love starts off slowly
As we discover each other,
But starts going quickly
As we go on further.

And all of a sudden
You shiver and shake.
You moan and you scream
With the love that we make.

And after you finish
It's my turn at last.
I stroke you much harder
As my time comes to pass.

And so we have finished.
The hours flew on by.
We hold on to our bodies
As we let out a sigh.

We lay there all sweaty
Our bodies entwined.
Holding fast to each other
With it fresh in our minds.

We fall asleep softly
Right there where we lay.
Knowing the passion inside us
Will grow day by day.

dude.. that is one of the most amazing poems i've read in my whole life.
i'd say comparable to the likes of edgar allan poe with less metaphor.
very nice.... oh.. subject was great too.

Edgar Allen Poe? C'mon! It's okay, but it's no Quote the Raven. Thanks for the sentiment though.

Incidentally, it's a work of fiction based on events I'd like to happen in the future rather than something that has already transpired. Although, I was thinking about one girl in particular when I wrote it.

I really like this one. think it's one of my better ones.