Topic: When The Rain Stopped
SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Fri 12/12/08 09:57 AM
He mastered the lies
Such beautiful words and promises
Painted in forever friendship, or so it seemed
A vulnerable heart believed it all
Soon it began to sprinkle, our bond became soggy but nothing more
Then came the hard rain accompanied by angry thunder
He left without a second thought.
There I stood drenched in broken promises
Stuck in a prison of sickly sweet memory,
To this day angelic blue eyes take my breath away.
Time has carried me swiftly away
But never will I forget the lies painted in forever friendship
Exposed by a savage hell storm was the truth
Now trust is minimal, I don't expect friendship to be real
These days I often wonder...
What will the rain reveal?

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 12/12/08 10:06 AM
Great emotion, tater - it drips and storms with the rhythm of rain.

writer_gurl's photo
Fri 12/12/08 10:08 AM
:heart: it

no photo
Fri 12/12/08 10:56 AM
flowerforyou

(((Nicki))))

I owe you an e-mail, sorry been swamped at work again and exhausted by the time I get home at night