Topic: Precis please? | |
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A student has to precis this:
"The Medical Fraternity's prognonis was that the malady by which he was afflicted is resonantly declared to be labelled Human Immuno Virus Aquired Immune Deficiency Syndrone; previously entitled: Human T cell Lymphotropic Virus III. The victim referred to is the now deceased, but formerly very popular or famous movie star, Rock Hudson." Any suggestions? |
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Yeah he was gay and he died of aids!!!!!!
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She's right - acquired immunodeficiency syndrome is AIDS.
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He has to do WHAT to it?
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He meants to say 'made more precise', I think.
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Or maybe 'concise'.
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alrighty then!!!
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The passage is to make smaller with clarity enabling it to fit into the
provided space. |
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Okay nobody wants 2 do it. Here's my suggestion so far:
"Aids HIT Rock Bottom!!" |
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That's not funny at all. Rock Hudson was a great actor and artist. Unfortunately, he lived in a time in which he was not able to simply be himself.
To poke fun of AIDS or anyone who has died of AIDS is very pathetic and sick! You should be ashamed for your crass and thoughtless behavior! |
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That was a FAMOUS US newspaper headline.
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I do not care it was or wasn't. It wasn't funny! --- as your smileys suggested!
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