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I have my tasks and chores to do
yet no strain or stress, nor unsettledness can provoke my motivation I sit in comfort, with much work to do while lesser men accomplish not a time for thoughts to wander but still I wonder what my mind has to offer and can it distract me from what matters. I sit in comfort, and I ponder while lesser men accomplish *I would like this to be a creative workshop kind of poem, as I just can't add to it. It's short and sweet, and should probably stay that way, but I would also like to just see more out of the concept. Does anyone feel particularly inspired by it? enough to add a verse? |
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good job
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loving this piece just the way it is
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