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“The Traveler”
In sweet embrace of Heaven’s Night, The Traveler’s on her way No Moon illuminates her trail and yet she does not stray Unhurrying she travels on, not veering left or right Instinctively, she knows the path and then she sees the Light She hesitates and slows her step, disturbed by what she sees This Light that penetrates the night and her security Everywhere is Total Dark except this single beam She turns to flee then sudden stops to wonder what it means Not like her to be confused when instinct says to fly Not like her to freeze in flight and stop to ponder why But now, this time, it’s not the same, She feels her limbs are bound So even as the Light draws near, the Traveler stands her ground A memory and then it’s clear, the meaning of the Light ‘My Journey’s End,’ she realizes and marvels at the Sight What Others whispered or said out loud, ‘It comes to set you free - ‘a Light that radiates within the Dark --- the key to Eternity’ ‘ The End is not the End,’ they said, ‘It’s really just a start You’ll know for sure, when the time has come --- You’ll feel it in your heart’ They said that ‘you would know the truth when contrary to our way instead of fleeing the Unknown, you feel incline to stay’ ‘Bound you’ll feel,’ They told to her, ‘Captured by the Light’ And so she felt and thus she knew --- the stories must be right Greater shines the Brilliant Glow, and still she does not flee ‘The Promise is Fulfilled,’ she thinks, ‘The Light will set me free’ Too late the trucker saw the deer, nothing he could do No time for thought and less for brakes, he had to barrel thru he tried to veer but much too late and saw the doe impact First a thud and then a bounce, and realized that was that Drowsy only just before but wide awake by now The trucker mutters, ‘Thank you Lord --- a deer and not a cow!’ The Peterbilt speeds on its way, once more the Dark descends Beside the road, our Traveler lies, her life seeps to its end As Life begins to flutter out, she opens wide her eyes And with her last breath, wonders, ‘Was then it all a lie? ‘The Light they promised led to Peace, to Worlds everlasting ‘All a trick, designed to hide the uselessness of trying?’ As if to taunt her last few moments, another Light appears And in an instant, this Glorious Light sweeps away her fears Gone are the wounds and agony, she rises without pain And promptly turns tail to the Light and says, “Hell No, not that Again!” By Me & revised by My father |
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what great storytellers you are
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Very well written... loved it. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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That was great...
At first glance i thought oh hell another long write... First paragraph....You captured my attention... Beautifully written.... Great name there to, Brett. I have a Brett..my son... |
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Thanks for the comments, this poem is really best suited for reciting. So I can understand if the length of it scares most of these viewers away, as it would have probably scared me away as well.. lol.
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