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Topic: A Candle
jimmy99005 Joined Mon 07/21/08 Posts: 5815	Mon 12/01/08 05:05 AM
As I stare at this singly lit candle I can't help to think that I'm all alone My own little light A small amount of warmth Dancing within its limits Monuments of a flicker No two flames are the same Eventually it will burn out What is it about a candle that can remind you of yourself One day I'll be graced with the company of another A greater dance of light on the walls Warmth of each other The feel of limits disappear Flickers turn into a great burn Two different flames can join into one When the flame dies it leaves its mark to be remembered JMBC

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 12/01/08 06:00 AM
As I stare at this singly lit candle I can't help to think that I'm all alone My own little light A small amount of warmth Dancing within its limits Monuments of a flicker No two flames are the same Eventually it will burn out What is it about a candle that can remind you of yourself One day I'll be graced with the company of another A greater dance of light on the walls Warmth of each other The feel of limits disappear Flickers turn into a great burn Two different flames can join into one When the flame dies it leaves its mark to be remembered JMBC Beautiful and touching write jimmy! Keep in mind the possibility that the one flame you're looking at could be the two flames joined as one....that the Universe has ALREADY provided you with someone....you simply have yet to meet!

Ruth34611 Joined Sat 08/02/08 Posts: 32402	Mon 12/01/08 06:02 AM
I like it. A lot.

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 12/01/08 09:18 AM
sweet!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 12/01/08 09:26 AM
excellent

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 12/01/08 11:54 AM
nice

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 12/01/08 12:44 PM
awe some, and Jimmy is a cool name

jimmy99005 Joined Mon 07/21/08 Posts: 5815	Mon 12/01/08 03:25 PM
Thank you everyone

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Mon 12/01/08 03:41 PM
((((((((((((((((jimmy)))))))))))

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Mon 12/01/08 04:58 PM
As I stare at this singly lit candle I can't help to think that I'm all alone My own little light A small amount of warmth Dancing within its limits Monuments of a flicker No two flames are the same Eventually it will burn out What is it about a candle that can remind you of yourself One day I'll be graced with the company of another A greater dance of light on the walls Warmth of each other The feel of limits disappear Flickers turn into a great burn Two different flames can join into one When the flame dies it leaves its mark to be remembered JMBC Beautiful and touching write jimmy! Keep in mind the possibility that the one flame you're looking at could be the two flames joined as one....that the Universe has ALREADY provided you with someone....you simply have yet to meet! So well spoken Angel...and Jimmy, love the write

lilwick86 Joined Sun 11/23/08 Posts: 544	Tue 12/02/08 12:45 AM
This pome makes me want to post my poem about a candle, smiles

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