Topic: Lonely Voices in the Dark
brwnkimba's photo
Sat 11/29/08 09:20 AM
Heed the truth as knowledge is dispelled.
Sweet love turned sour and estranged by a jezebel.
Bold as the need to want something for free
& carelessly you've taken away all of our glee.

You'll always have a place deep in my heart.
Who could fill this empty space now?
I'm ready for someone to hold onto again.
I need just 1 woman to seal the part.

I opened up my mixed bag of tricks on someone who treated me cruel.
Now that we're no longer in the mix it's time for you to play the fool.

Hope the choices you've made get you where you want to be.
Lonely voices in the dark are where you'll hear from me.

Dreaming of the way it used to be, thinking you've made a big mistake.
Now you're scheming on a way to get that old thing back, often up until day break.

I really don't see us the way it was ever again.
You should've had more faith instead of letting someone else caress your chin.

A revelation once love is truly found.
Some never experience this feeling as life circles round & round.
Insatiable, my heart used to calm when we're apart.
Once near each other so hard to temper the spark.

We glistened as night evolved forward enticing dawns light.
It's hard to escape the embrace of desire when it's in full flight.
Even when we'd fight making amends was pure delight.
So for you tonight I extend my emotions and pray for guidance, clarity & sight.

She's complex perfection on the path towards completion.
If the query is unfair I assure a lack of achievement.
Engage her as your equal and give her someone worth believing.
Stopping all those lonely voices in the dark from speaking.


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Sat 11/29/08 09:22 AM
Beautiful write...as alwaysflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 11/29/08 09:38 AM
Thank you Darlin'smooched

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Sat 11/29/08 09:52 AM
WOW flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 11/29/08 05:57 PM
:heart:pkd1220

LAMom's photo
Sun 11/30/08 08:31 PM

WOW flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


ditto on the WOW, no double Ditto

WOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW flowers

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 12/04/08 01:03 PM
Thank you LaMom, and have a great weekendflowers

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/04/08 01:05 PM

Thank you LaMom, and have a great weekendflowers


You too Beautiful one flowers

Jess642's photo
Thu 12/04/08 01:10 PM
"When the student is ready the teacher will appear"...

flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Fri 12/05/08 08:23 AM

"When the student is ready the teacher will appear"...

flowerforyou

As the sun goes down do shadows shed a tear?