Topic: Candy Apple City
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Fri 11/28/08 07:50 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Fri 11/28/08 07:51 AM



Candy Apple City


Elusive dreams in the mist of a blind mans perspective.
Ambiguous consciousness and a penny for thoughts, that lead to nothing.
Fortitude persuasions all the while capturing sand in his hands.
Masquerades of emotions and a side order of illusions are the games people play.

Candy Apple City of Stone on the horizon.

The pendulum of destiny swings, and cuts your life into pieces.
A gambit set a fire by the tears shred by the crucifiction of innocence.
Fallen angels raise their chains from the pit of hell while looking back on the dance they use to share with life.
All the while life goes on & on.....never looking back.

Candy Apple City of Stone on the horizon.

The foul still sits on the hill each day as the world goes around searching for itself.
A blind mans perspective in the mist of a vanilla dream.
Blowing kisses in wind while standing within the mist of a storm.
The shadow of schizophrenia walks within the blind mans perspective day after day.

Candy Apple City of Stone on the horizon.




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Fri 11/28/08 01:51 PM
Awesome write, it sounds like a song\poem. I notice you use small references of the Beatles sometime. I don't quit under stand this one it's a little deep. huh

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Fri 11/28/08 02:04 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Fri 11/28/08 02:07 PM

Awesome write, it sounds like a song\poem. I notice you use small references of the Beatles sometime. I don't quit under stand this one it's a little deep. huh


You notice the Beatles references....(Foul on the hill) sometimes I reference Prince, Dave Matthew...lol

This is a poem/song is roughly about a schizophrenic man. The city is a new world system in the future or the horizon.

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Fri 11/28/08 02:53 PM
Very well put together! I imagine many of my patients really would understand and appreciate this!

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Fri 11/28/08 03:32 PM

Very well put together! I imagine many of my patients really would understand and appreciate this!
Thank you....flowerforyou that's a true compliment from a woman who loves her job...laugh