Topic: just a short poem....
liliuminterspinas's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:20 PM
My Longing

Oh, how I long to feel your embrace
To see the love upon your face
To hear you whisper softly in my ear
To kiss away all my tears
Let our souls become one
Never let it be undone
Keep me close to your heart
Never let us part
Hold me…please
And never let me go.



rather short but to the point. i wrote this a month ago and i dedicate
it to (((R)))flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:21 PM
Short, sweet, from the heart and to the point. Very nice.

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:23 PM
((((((((((((( April )))))))))))))))))))))

Its nice to see your work again,, I have missed you,
Your poem is Beautiful and very heartfelt,,,, Love is
in the air and in your Heart,,, I am so happy for you and
(((((( R )))))))))))) love you :heart:

liliuminterspinas's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:24 PM
Thank you both very much!
Love Ya
flowerforyou :heart:

bibby7's photo
Wed 04/11/07 10:36 PM
If Only
By Bobby7

If only I could write a poem that everyone could read,
Then I’d know, within my deepest heart, that I’d done well, indeed.

If only I could write a poem that would bring the whole world peace,
Make us brothers; make us sisters and make the bloodshed cease.

If only I could write a poem that would melt the hardest heart,
And tear down all the fences that are keeping us apart.

If only I could write a poem that would lift a troubled soul,
Then I would reap a bounty that’s more precious than pure gold.

If only I could write a poem that would cause an eye to tear,
And let my brothers and my sisters pass through life without a fear.

If only I could write a poem that would let all see the sun,
Then, I’d gladly put away my pen. For I’d know my work was done.



liliuminterspinas's photo
Tue 04/17/07 04:14 PM
flowerforyou