Topic: Wonder What Ya Think?
JMartinPersonal's photo
Tue 11/25/08 10:52 AM
Recently changed...

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Tue 11/25/08 10:53 AM
I'm a guy so the pics do nothing for me

but nice writeup

lilith401's photo
Tue 11/25/08 10:59 AM
Well, here goes. You asked....

The pictures are professional, which irks me and is not representational, especially since you said they were a year old and you now have a beard.

The narrative is a bit cold and stiff, and reads like a resume for a job. Towards the end it warms up a bit.... but only slightly.

Relax, and post some photos that are recent and candid.