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Live Oak Reaching out Far and wide High and low Out passed what seems practical Out beyond simple physics Stretching ever away Testing its strength Showing its patients Cutting the sunlight Into slivers Distorting the rays as it sees fit Cast a crooked shadow Tracking along the clapboard siding Slicing a sunbeam At mid window Lengthened silhouette Of early morning sun Through the glass Passed the drawn curtains Warped once more By the foot of your bed Climbing to find your feet Inaudible whispers In segmented shade I am here… |
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Live Oak Reaching out Far and wide High and low Out passed what seems practical Out beyond simple physics Stretching ever away Testing its strength Showing its patients Cutting the sunlight Into slivers Distorting the rays as it sees fit Cast a crooked shadow Tracking along the clapboard siding Slicing a sunbeam At mid window Lengthened silhouette Of early morning sun Through the glass Passed the drawn curtains Warped once more By the foot of your bed Climbing to find your feet Inaudible whispers In segmented shade I am here… I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it. 
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Live Oak Reaching out Far and wide High and low Out passed what seems practical Out beyond simple physics Stretching ever away Testing its strength Showing its patients Cutting the sunlight Into slivers Distorting the rays as it sees fit Cast a crooked shadow Tracking along the clapboard siding Slicing a sunbeam At mid window Lengthened silhouette Of early morning sun Through the glass Passed the drawn curtains Warped once more By the foot of your bed Climbing to find your feet Inaudible whispers In segmented shade I am here… I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it.
it’s easy (A) it is in response to ako’s post i was picturing the window in her story maybe i should have put it there
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i can see it..awesome
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Live Oak Reaching out Far and wide High and low Out passed what seems practical Out beyond simple physics Stretching ever away Testing its strength Showing its patients Cutting the sunlight Into slivers Distorting the rays as it sees fit Cast a crooked shadow Tracking along the clapboard siding Slicing a sunbeam At mid window Lengthened silhouette Of early morning sun Through the glass Passed the drawn curtains Warped once more By the foot of your bed Climbing to find your feet Inaudible whispers In segmented shade I am here… I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it.
it’s easy (A) it is in response to ako’s post i was picturing the window in her story maybe i should have put it there
Ahhhh I see. I thought I saw some semblance of familiarity. Two great minds~My ako and my Kevin. An awesome sight to behold |
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all tales continue somehow even after the final chapter
i love this, kev 
very nice |
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i can see it..awesome
thank you for your vision and response
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Live Oak Reaching out Far and wide High and low Out passed what seems practical Out beyond simple physics Stretching ever away Testing its strength Showing its patients Cutting the sunlight Into slivers Distorting the rays as it sees fit Cast a crooked shadow Tracking along the clapboard siding Slicing a sunbeam At mid window Lengthened silhouette Of early morning sun Through the glass Passed the drawn curtains Warped once more By the foot of your bed Climbing to find your feet Inaudible whispers In segmented shade I am here… I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it.
it’s easy (A) it is in response to ako’s post i was picturing the window in her story maybe i should have put it there
Ahhhh I see. I thought I saw some semblance of familiarity. Two great minds~My ako and my Kevin. An awesome sight to behold 
well,one great mind and mine (yet to be determined) but, thank you just the same
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all tales continue somehow even after the final chapter i love this, kev
very nice yes they do weather we know it or not...want it or not...admit it or not... thanks for the inspiration...  
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Edited by
AngelLight
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Wed 11/19/08 09:12 AM
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Neat write K
ak0 does have inspiring writes!
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Great write and I can see the tree clearly through the vision you've shown
 
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nice, yet I've enjoyed all your poems, talent!
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((( Kevin ))))
You capture the Beauty of All, Its always a treat to come home and see what you have waiting for us
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angel
pkd jim mom thank you all but, this was just an add to an even better write
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Nice kev
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Very nicely done my friend. COuld be a subtile dual meaning here which shines easy upon one's heart. Excellent write kc.
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Very nicely done my friend. COuld be a subtile dual meaning here which shines easy upon one's heart. Excellent write kc.
i knew you would not miss that... 
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 goodjob
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