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Topic: ACT 1
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Wed 11/19/08 11:16 AM

these directors always intercepted the wrong time, nice write:wink: flowerforyou
Frustrated I am
Unknowns hold us
Captive to a time
A place, reunited
The spot in the movie
Rewound over and over
Comfortable, but for
A moment.
Short story perfect
But a novel
We never make
With but one take
There's no perfection
Only recollection of
The half steps, the
Missteps, the
Stepping backwards
Off the ledge
Free falling
And then
The director
Shouts cut.




thanks Frank- hope your day is going wellwaving

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Wed 11/19/08 11:21 AM
Another wonderful write! flowerforyou

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Wed 11/19/08 12:36 PM

Another wonderful write! flowerforyou


thanks Suz- good to see youwaving flowers

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