Topic: Moonlight Lover Part 1
Milotent's photo
Wed 11/12/08 09:04 PM
Moonlight Lover Part 1



In the early light of Dawn,

When the mist still holds the ground.

I rise,

I rise to watch her walk beneath the trees deep emerald green.

So lonely she is with sorrow well weighed;

Heart is shameless yet lamenting some pain.

How I yearn to hold her,

To comfort her weary soul.

Yet she is unwilling to be consoled,

And I as I reach for her hands,

She passes back into the mist.

She fades away with the setting moon,
With sorrow still heavy in her chest.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 11/13/08 05:52 AM
Looking forward to the next encounter.

Milotent's photo
Thu 11/13/08 02:11 PM

Looking forward to the next encounter.


Part two should go up later today when I have time to dig it out

AngelLight's photo
Thu 11/13/08 03:05 PM
Wow! Great write. I can feel the stillness yet the movement of this piece.

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