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What is this beauty before me I Never saw it before today Life taught me some lessons I learned to open my eyes Where was all this rapture yester-year when i needed it so bad blinded by myself i ran afraid to be happy somehow was a fear This is my new beginning alone on my own I can make this change with my new senses Take this breath I know it's my first tastes so fresh clean as my new slate I know now what i was Missing myself in the dark I now have my candle lit Leading the way I'm going forward ----------------------------------------------- Notes: First Draft |
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Don't change it
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Really? The funny this is this was written when i was in a bad mood.
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Don't change it Please don't... Its great just like it is. |
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Don't change it Please don't... Its great just like it is. Why thank you, thank you both. Suggestions for a title? |
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