Topic: farewe;);)
aries43's photo
Mon 11/10/08 03:37 AM
my love
my lover
my mate

my fractured soul

half empty frozen cold
half parched, no longer consumed
quench of fire and ice save
fold of dew survival

have you gone far off in the sunset
to search for one more exciting than this
or have you taken
some long coastal highway
destination of retire from
the rustling leaves that
wrestle your restlessness
perhaps a simpler sleepy island
home, safe and easy like me

and was it a farewell smile, no reply
that i saw in dream
longer you turned back before you dove right in
and as fast gone in the ocean deep

or was it just mine
my own fire-icy storming
to reckon fragments of let go

a day passes each to years and still
i remember my love of in love with you
i like to imagine you so well and happy





Sexyklp4U's photo
Mon 11/10/08 03:52 AM
flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Mon 11/10/08 04:09 AM
I imagined Richard Burton reciting this. Love your word play flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:48 AM
very nice and welcome:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou