Topic: Your Sins
dtbax's photo
Tue 11/04/08 11:58 AM
.Your Sin's .


You stare to the darkness,you just see your pain,
its staring back at you,drowning you in sadness.

Your tears flow, blinding you, just for sin,
for no reason, your mind falling to the emptiness.

You stare to the darkness, once again,
your eyes see , your sins, drowning you in sadness.



yes written by me!

LAMom's photo
Tue 11/04/08 12:04 PM

.Your Sin's .


You stare to the darkness,you just see your pain,
its staring back at you,drowning you in sadness.

Your tears flow, blinding you, just for sin,
for no reason, your mind falling to the emptiness.

You stare to the darkness, once again,
your eyes see , your sins, drowning you in sadness.



yes written by me!



Nicely done flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 11/04/08 12:06 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou nice write

welcome to the poetry forumbigsmile